| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maria Kintner on 08/05/07 at 09:36 PM This is so true. ;) |
| Posted by Shonda Creemer on 08/05/07 at 10:01 PM Yes, time has always been my worst foe. Excellent piece Aaron ~ thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/05/07 at 10:33 PM I love that last line. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/06/07 at 02:25 PM Fascinating images here. I like this very much. |
| Posted by Jim Moore on 08/06/07 at 02:34 PM Constantly moving forward, never turning a shoulder to see where it's been, only an eye on where it's going. Enjoyed this! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 08/06/07 at 11:03 PM I won't argue with that. Excellent description. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/07/07 at 06:42 PM Well thought out piece of writing Aaron. Chillingly much truth and wisdom here in how you have personfied "time." |
| Posted by Christina Gleason on 08/09/07 at 03:51 PM Works better without all that cussing ;) And, anyway, it is a small and fantastic thought. I really rather like this. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 08/09/07 at 05:56 PM "to admire the way its sand paper edges
work their rough magic on your skin." Mama told me there would be days like this and you have captured it wonderfully with this description. I try to not let time defeat me, but defeat me it does...great ananlogy. smh
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| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/15/07 at 07:45 AM Ahhh the eternal beautiful b*tch who despises all who love her. What a personification! I love it. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/21/09 at 02:32 AM Congrats on POTD! |
