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He who refreshes others, will himself be refreshed
by Keith D AllisonOne path
One breath
One life
Upon the darkened sky
Upon the flowered path
Will you pour your water upon
Or like most
Will you
Just walk on 06/17/2007 Posted on 06/17/2007
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 06/17/07 at 04:27 PM This little poem was as refreshing as the title. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/18/07 at 04:25 PM Thought provoking poem Keith. Can easily be applied to those who do and don't comment on others' work here at Pathetic.org. :o) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/19/07 at 04:11 AM I really like this - a challenge, actually. As a gardener I particularly like the "flowered path" and the use of water, that simple elixir. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 06/19/07 at 04:52 PM a new take on the scratch my back i'll scratch yours...only much more pleasantly worded.very refreshing, in deed. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 06/22/07 at 12:05 AM I keep coming back to this, trying to figure out what to say. I give up. I don't know what to say, other than i like it. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/24/07 at 07:36 AM You never know when you might be entertaining angels unaware, whose thirst you might be quenching. This captures it very nicely. |
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