He who refreshes others, will himself be refreshed
by Keith D Allison
Upon the darkened sky
Upon the flowered path
Will you pour your water upon
Or like most
Just walk on
Posted on 06/17/2007
Copyright © 2022 Keith D Allison
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by A. Paige White on 06/17/07 at 04:27 PM|
This little poem was as refreshing as the title.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/18/07 at 04:25 PM|
Thought provoking poem Keith. Can easily be applied to those who do and don't comment on others' work here at Pathetic.org. :o)
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/19/07 at 04:11 AM|
I really like this - a challenge, actually. As a gardener I particularly like the "flowered path" and the use of water, that simple elixir.
|Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 06/19/07 at 04:52 PM|
a new take on the scratch my back i'll scratch yours...only much more pleasantly worded.very refreshing, in deed.
|Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 06/22/07 at 12:05 AM|
I keep coming back to this, trying to figure out what to say. I give up. I don't know what to say, other than i like it.
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/24/07 at 07:36 AM|
You never know when you might be entertaining angels unaware, whose thirst you might be quenching. This captures it very nicely.