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Your Way
by Kyle Anne KishMy body mingled with yours
and for just a moment,
I saw the distant shores.
There was no need for comment.
And for just a moment
time stood still with open doors.
There was no need for comment.
You swept my hair ... such sensuous lures.
Time stood still with open doors.
You were such a tender gent.
You swept my hair ... such sensuous lures,
for a couple hours ... softly spent.
You were such a tender gent.
I saw the distant shores,
for a couple hours ... softly spent,
my body mingled with yours.
06/04/2007 Author's Note: Words at Play challenge - June 2007
Pantoum
Posted on 06/05/2007
Copyright © 2024 Kyle Anne Kish
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/07 at 03:34 AM Well, you better freaking win, because this kicks ass. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 06/05/07 at 03:37 AM Gorgeous Kyle Anne! I didn't realize a challenge had been posted. I've never tried a pantoum... heh... I can't even pronounce it! Actually, I don't know that I've ever read one before either... I'm so ignorant. You've intrigued me! |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 06/05/07 at 04:39 AM Just when I have given up on love you make me almost want to believe. Very nice. |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 06/05/07 at 10:06 AM Wow! Just wow! I agree with Gabriel... Go Kyle Anne! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/05/07 at 02:56 PM Sounds surrealistic like a dream. I like! |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 06/06/07 at 03:38 AM This is great! I love it... |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/09/07 at 04:18 PM Wow! —this is divine divine divine! |
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