|
I can't live without you
by Ronald A PavellasOh-Two
I can't live without you
Too much, you burn me up
Too little, I gasp for more
Twenty-one percent
Of all the air I breathe is you
But I need trees too, 'cause
Trees make you, Oh-Two
And trees need you
If combined with "Cee"
So I need Cee-Oh-Two too
But too much Cee-Oh-Two
Is bad, they say
Point-oh-three percent
Of the air I breathe
Is Cee-Oh-Two
Is this enough for the trees? 05/19/2007 Posted on 05/19/2007
Copyright © 2024 Ronald A Pavellas
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/19/07 at 02:26 PM Clever chemistry lesson! :) |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 05/19/07 at 03:10 PM Very interesting perspective and still you wonder if the trees are okay...I suppose it is easy to do so knowing your own safety is ensured. Clever. ~JPP |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 05/20/07 at 04:15 AM Great play on words, Ronald. This is extremely imaginative. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 05/23/07 at 07:13 PM LOL! at first i was all settled in for a nice love poem. what a riot! i love this. |
| 
