| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 05/18/07 at 11:03 PM i have learned...(but am still trying to execute) that in life...you cannot let someone else run your show. i am struggling with that right now, but the beauty of it all is, is that when the strength comes to the surface, we realize that the quick sand isn't quick afterall. great write. great emotion played through nature. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/19/07 at 01:34 AM Excellent expression of defiance and will to survive. I can sooo relate to this my onw way; from one superhero to another. :o) |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/19/07 at 12:41 PM There is an appealing sense of quiet valiance here...a very potent metaphor. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 05/20/07 at 11:46 PM Admirable fortitude (for me this would describe obstinacy) - and we are quite capable of digging our own holes :) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/21/07 at 12:07 AM More than a defensive posture proferred here! An interesting mix of metaphors actually. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 05/21/07 at 12:24 AM This should make a few hairs bristle, an excellent "told you so". |
