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cuts like butter

by Kristina Woodhill

trimming is better
and cuts like that
butter i heard about
wow! what a thrill
it is now to just zip
through i feel like
a chef in some kitchen
cuisine it's like layer
cake making without
the big scene and i
may not know
sculpting and i
may not a maze
but i do know
a flat top and i
know how to
graze that without
all the glazing
without all the fat
i can trim all
my hedges
in something called
flat!! and baby,
oh, baby, i like
it like that!

04/14/2007

Author's Note: spring clean up, bring it on!! ;)

Posted on 04/14/2007
Copyright © 2021 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 04/14/07 at 05:34 PM

I like the way you broke the lines and the way this runs on in a nice sort of flow. And the use of "a maze" is clever. I hate heavy duty yardwork....but you made this sound like fun!

Posted by Anne Boulender on 04/14/07 at 05:46 PM

if this is about what i think its about, i'de like to know what exactly youre using that it makes so easy and quick.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/14/07 at 07:25 PM

Thank God for poetry....and power tools. Delighted! Thanks.

Posted by Laura Doom on 04/15/07 at 07:21 PM

Yeh - too many hackers thinking outside the box (non sequitur? - easily removed without secateurs)... is that goat butter?

Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/18/07 at 05:54 PM

:-) :-) at a delightful take on an ordinary spring chore, you create a dish I am now savoring.

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