| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/09/07 at 03:43 AM Nice style, as always. I really liked the voice in this. |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 04/09/07 at 05:44 AM great rhythm and flow, i agree, the scene and meaning aren't too far behind. ~JPP |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/09/07 at 07:26 AM This is just a delight! Thanks. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 04/09/07 at 12:43 PM i catch
the drift
of sound
it curls
within
my ear
.....loved this! |
| Posted by Jared Fladeland on 04/11/07 at 04:08 AM this very much intrigued me. I always wanted to read ahead to what the next line was going to be. very enjoyable read |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/15/07 at 06:41 PM Associations...the perceptual process does have its limitations, although these surface in the context of an incredible swell. Poignant perhaps, but no regrets...I have an intimate admiration for your ability to turn language into poetry. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/20/07 at 02:28 PM Worthy fusion of style and message...I like the mood this puts me in! |
