| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/04/07 at 10:20 PM Breakfast of champions. ;o) |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 04/05/07 at 07:53 PM sounds like a drink i could use right now ;) i'm ready for a break... when do i get one??? |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/06/07 at 10:03 PM Strange - I had a premonition that this was coming :) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/08/07 at 02:37 AM Now there is a unique way to kick off a morning, hehe!! You kicked off a whimsical and witty winners with this one, Genevieve. The title seems so subtle, then the last line sneaks up and grabs your olive. Good stuff! |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 04/17/07 at 11:45 AM conjours a sad image, great write |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/26/07 at 02:30 PM Yeah, I'm with Dave F. on this one - it could be a sad image, though doesn't have to be so. I think your clever use of words gives this a couple of paths for my mind to wander down and I like that. |
