| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/07/07 at 07:52 PM ...ha! Great, Chris....still room on the dance card! Thanks. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 03/07/07 at 11:46 PM I always found this one very cute. She sure had a mesmerizing dance, and figure, and general appearance, and I can just see and hear this moment. Very fun and well done. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 03/08/07 at 04:37 AM what fun! very flirtatious and vivid! you've painted a fun-filled picture, something i've seen many a time on a dance floor ;) |
| Posted by Dan Garcia-Black on 03/09/07 at 04:03 AM Chris, sounds like this place has better dances than my rest home. I'd like to meet your dance partner's mother. Great images. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/09/07 at 04:54 AM Heh. I like the voice and style in this one. Call me crazy, but I don't think I've seen this approach from you too many times. Nice. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/09/07 at 05:05 AM Thanks for this motion and music - a mermerizing lady with the moves to match. Nicely done! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/10/07 at 03:58 PM And I love the way the title flows off the tongue... (just like Louise...) |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 03/11/07 at 05:21 AM lol.. you describe so perfectly the Luaus here in Hawaii.. and the conspiracy to get certain ones up on that dance floor... it is a rip-roaring good time to be had by all.. especially the more Mai Tais one consumes.. the merrier... aloha.'-) |
