| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 03/08/07 at 04:39 AM i'm sorry but this had me laughing out loud! you've done a great job capturing this histerical scene |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/10/07 at 04:24 PM
I didn't know what was happening with whom, and found meself clinging slowly...never havs a brief verse lasted so long for me...Og!
And then I feel like laughing and crying with relief.
Oh, mn mn mn!
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| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 03/12/07 at 10:20 PM Wonderfully written...what limmericks should aspire to! (grin) - Anyone for fish? - RCat |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/22/09 at 12:44 AM The one who got away fled across the pond into ours on the thread of your lines, on the end of your poet's tines. :-) |
