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Peter Pan

by Keith D Allison

  

Our flight

has lasted

almost

a lifetime

 

I would have never believed

that you would have turned on me

to lay me low

to bring the pain

 

Things now cannot be the same

you have taught me fear

so from now on

it's Jiff or Skippy

how I hope, they will not do the same

03/06/2007

Posted on 03/06/2007
Copyright © 2022 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/06/07 at 01:14 PM

Heeheehhee! funny.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/06/07 at 03:08 PM

LOL! Not what I expected for an ending. Along the cruchy uneven road to peanut butter never never land.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/06/07 at 07:27 PM

Hi Keith...I like the turn this takes in the penultimate line! Otherwise, I was set to hear about forever-children having to grow up. Nice stroke of the pen, here! Thanks.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/07/07 at 02:32 AM

Ah, so a recall of Peter Pan!! I did not know. My sis-in-law calls Jiff - "Jiffy Lube," due to its hydrogenated oils, or somesuch. I got nothin' on Skippy - unless it left town. ;) I enjoyed your poem - first stanza is great.

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