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Impossible!
by Alisa Jswhen love is welcomed
into the heart of another
and together infused,
a flame eternal
forever ...
and this love is encouraged
to develop and learn
this dance of the soul,
entwined ...
how can you stop
suddenly,
draw away from the fire
do you think it all dies?
if this flame is forever,
eternal ...
impossible! 02/22/2007 Posted on 02/23/2007
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/23/07 at 01:46 AM yet another hard hitting, well framed, absolutely beautiful piece of work. preach on, sister! love ya! |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/23/07 at 08:59 AM Well!! Just well!! let me say this..* puts on muh sage hat* Love is never eternal - eternal is of two people - committed together - not one alone, we may carry a flame, a torch , a pitchfork - the pitchfork comes in handy!! ( I KNOW THIS)*lol*. Love is just a word,unless, it is used with honesty ,care, tenderness, love needs to be backed up with action - or else - it only ever remains just a word. ( I know this too). Ok, the price of this lesson is " Tea"? Zippy's? *grin* |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/27/07 at 05:28 PM Reminds me of that old song that goes "Impossible to ask the sun to leave the sky, Impossible..." This piece acts as a worthy poetic extension of that concept. Nice work Alisa. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 03/01/07 at 03:41 AM "impossible!" ahhh, that whole poem made me sigh and feel like jelly inside. could it be? can it happen? i'm just a jelly donut and i believe such things. beautiful poem, Alisa. |
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