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i will if you will - haiku

by Christel Crews

Take my hand, hold on
Through whatever lies ahead
I'll stand beside you

02/20/2007

Author's Note: ok, my second attempt... any thoughts? and what about a title???

Posted on 02/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/21/07 at 05:19 PM

now this is a happy poem...:)

Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/22/07 at 01:45 AM

Love it. Reminds me of soulmates, don't know if that works for a title though.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/22/07 at 03:38 PM

I think it's perfect

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/22/07 at 05:23 PM

I like the title the way it is. Great show of support in the tradition of "us against the world." This is my favourite of your haikus so far. :o)

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/23/07 at 03:34 AM

Christel, simply beautiful - a definition of love that I've learned from those I know who have been married a very long time. Hand in hand through whatever happens in life.
~Chelle~

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/23/07 at 04:17 AM

This feels good and right. Nice job.

Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/24/07 at 08:25 AM

Great work for a second Haiku! I love it just as it is..

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/24/07 at 09:16 PM

Nice haiku Chris. Hand In Hand?....Charlie

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