Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/21/07 at 05:19 PM now this is a happy poem...:) |
Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/22/07 at 01:45 AM Love it. Reminds me of soulmates, don't know if that works for a title though. |
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/22/07 at 03:38 PM I think it's perfect |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/22/07 at 05:23 PM I like the title the way it is. Great show of support in the tradition of "us against the world." This is my favourite of your haikus so far. :o) |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/23/07 at 03:34 AM Christel, simply beautiful - a definition of love that I've learned from those I know who have been married a very long time. Hand in hand through whatever happens in life.
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/23/07 at 04:17 AM This feels good and right. Nice job. |
Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/24/07 at 08:25 AM Great work for a second Haiku! I love it just as it is.. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/24/07 at 09:16 PM Nice haiku Chris. Hand In Hand?....Charlie |