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Beautiful
by Rhonda Maneki
I have never seen myself as beautiful,
and yet, though your words, only though your eyes,
only within your love,
do i shine like the stars
in the night sky.
Only then, in those sacred moments with you,
have I known what it is to touch
divinity and feel glorious as a woman.
-beautiful-
02/12/2007
Posted on 02/12/2007
Copyright © 2024 Rhonda Maneki
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/12/07 at 03:32 PM A wonderful write... thank you for sharing.... |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/12/07 at 04:24 PM A gorgeous reflection of his love for you and how it makes you feel. Quite divine... |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/12/07 at 08:23 PM You gotta love honesty that's laid out as wonderfully as this piece is. Very nicely done. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 02/12/07 at 08:48 PM sweet Rhonda... very sweet... such a tender melody from a heart full of love.... |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/13/07 at 01:11 AM This does reflect the softness, the tenderness, the beauty of love which lingers in the reflection of every touch, every space, every moment thats shared together in togetherness, even in the words unspoken. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 02/13/07 at 01:22 AM yes, "...those sacred moments with you" in which "I...[have] known divinity" - this is the most beautiful reflection in this soft piece, of a connection that can hardly be expressed through words. Nicely done.
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| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/13/07 at 05:33 PM -sigh- ... then I sigh again. Such a beautiful poem. It's wonderful how the "right" person can make one feel more than they have ever felt before. -sigh- :) |
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