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Illumination
by Joe CramerThe light bulb
goes off
and I'm left
wondering
what the original
thought was at all.
Et al?
My mind wanders,
wonders what
is it all about...
Guess
I'll just have
to wait to find
out.
The opposite of "on"
is "no"
which seems to be my life's story.
Some illumination
02/08/2007 Posted on 02/08/2007
Copyright © 2026 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/09/07 at 07:43 PM Joe, I love your use of wordplay in this piece. You've used it to play out a deeply emotional poem, that reads beautifully. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/09/07 at 07:44 PM I was looking for your "ode to zen" but couldn't find it in your library. However, I'm glad I stumbled into this poem.
Congratulations on your POTD. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/11/07 at 01:27 AM Philosophy and humor rolled into one poem. Excellent. And can I identify. Too many times I've started thinking of something only to forget what it is. Well, with me, it might be loss of brain cells.
~Chelle~
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/16/07 at 06:43 PM Hmmm, and yet your life is not over - I suspect there will be many light bulbs blinking on and off yet for you. I like the poem and the illumination of it. Thank you. |
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