| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Butcher on 02/08/07 at 09:16 PM i like it, i like the tone. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/09/07 at 07:43 PM Joe, I love your use of wordplay in this piece. You've used it to play out a deeply emotional poem, that reads beautifully. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/09/07 at 07:44 PM I was looking for your "ode to zen" but couldn't find it in your library. However, I'm glad I stumbled into this poem.
Congratulations on your POTD. |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/09/07 at 11:10 PM I really enjoyed this piece. I believe the Illumination is a constant tug at consciousness and sometimes turning "on" to "no" is saving some peace of mind. So, the turning to "no" is sometimes saving ourselves. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/11/07 at 01:27 AM Philosophy and humor rolled into one poem. Excellent. And can I identify. Too many times I've started thinking of something only to forget what it is. Well, with me, it might be loss of brain cells.
~Chelle~
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/16/07 at 06:43 PM Hmmm, and yet your life is not over - I suspect there will be many light bulbs blinking on and off yet for you. I like the poem and the illumination of it. Thank you. |
