|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Christel Crews on 02/06/07 at 01:58 AM|
what a true piece!!! this is very well done.. i'm sorry you had this experience!
|Posted by A. Paige White on 02/06/07 at 04:26 AM|
Very poetic way to express your disappointment. Well done.
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/06/07 at 02:32 PM|
This piece is so true and is something everryone can relate to. Great job! LOVED the images.
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/06/07 at 07:22 PM|
|Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/08/07 at 04:40 PM|
Pow! That's what the last line of this poem did to me. Most excellent, Genevieve.
|Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 02/09/07 at 02:37 PM|
|Posted by Janine Euladia on 02/26/07 at 04:39 AM|
So far everything you write is gripping, how am I going to get anywork done? Now I have to write about my addiction to your poetry!
|Posted by Kate Swearingen on 03/07/07 at 04:39 AM|
Wow - how much more upsetting is disappointment than anger or hatred? And you've captured that so perfectly. This made my heart sink...
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/18/07 at 05:53 PM|
Alcoholic boyfriend? Thought provoking whichever way the mirror cracks.
|Posted by Maria Kintner on 08/22/07 at 05:12 PM|
The best thing about good poetry is that it conveys the exact emotion it was supposed to, becoming an experience.