| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 02/06/07 at 01:58 AM what a true piece!!! this is very well done.. i'm sorry you had this experience! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 02/06/07 at 04:26 AM Very poetic way to express your disappointment. Well done. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/06/07 at 02:32 PM This piece is so true and is something everryone can relate to. Great job! LOVED the images. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/06/07 at 07:22 PM Funtastic....Charlie |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/08/07 at 04:40 PM Pow! That's what the last line of this poem did to me. Most excellent, Genevieve. |
| Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 02/09/07 at 02:37 PM Love this! |
| Posted by Janine Euladia on 02/26/07 at 04:39 AM So far everything you write is gripping, how am I going to get anywork done? Now I have to write about my addiction to your poetry! |
| Posted by Kate Swearingen on 03/07/07 at 04:39 AM Wow - how much more upsetting is disappointment than anger or hatred? And you've captured that so perfectly. This made my heart sink... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/18/07 at 05:53 PM Alcoholic boyfriend? Thought provoking whichever way the mirror cracks. |
| Posted by Maria Kintner on 08/22/07 at 05:12 PM The best thing about good poetry is that it conveys the exact emotion it was supposed to, becoming an experience. |
