| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/03/07 at 03:08 PM I looove this! you have painted the picture so vividly i could actually see it...the object of a young man's desire standing outside on a sunny day preparing to take a swim..and when she dives in, oh my....sigh. Beautiful longing, beautiful writing... |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/21/07 at 03:23 PM George, this poem was so beautifully put together that it reads like a song being carried by the wind. Thank you for posting this wonderfully, vivid poem. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/13/07 at 11:37 AM You know George, I have oft pondered the same and I have concluded that the number is infinite, the times that nature has thirsted to lay down with mankind so as to teach them that nature and they are one and the same. And this poem is lovely and great humility displays. |
| Posted by Melissa Panther on 05/06/07 at 08:25 PM Entirely exquisite...=) |
| Posted by Rowan Luis on 05/11/07 at 09:29 PM Ohh yes, I like this a lot, thank you. I'm going to add it to my favourites so I can read again easily.. unseen nude, bending branches, quaking hungry ground and water caressing.. favourite parts, I shall think of this next time I lie on the ground :) |
| Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 12/08/07 at 03:35 AM I like the relationship with Nature that this expresses. Yes, nice work! |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 02/17/08 at 04:41 AM Intensely beautiful and sensual all at the same time. Thank you for sharing your insight with us out here.. aloha..;-) |
