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a promise kept
by Christel Crews"I will not run away"
he said to her
that cold and windy night
And as he left
he walked away taking
with him her heart 01/27/2007 Author's Note: he had to leave, to drive the 3 hours home because the weekend was over... one day he won't have to leave... one day :)
Posted on 01/31/2007
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/31/07 at 05:47 AM Oh yes. Hope burns brilliantly here! Delighted! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/31/07 at 09:53 AM Ah Christel, can I ever relate to this one. Only I was burned in the end and she could no longer stand the strain of our long-distance relationship and met another! This one truly makes me sad! I hope there will be a happier ending for you! I should never have let her go, too late! |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/31/07 at 11:57 AM One day....soon. :) |
| Posted by Peter Humphreys on 02/01/07 at 09:12 AM Love and the pain of separation are so often intrinsic parts of our life ... but not forever. I hope that day is soon. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/06/07 at 03:25 PM As Shakespeare wrote: "parting is such sweet sorrow." Here's to "one day!" |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/06/07 at 03:54 PM Sweet promise - and this makes me feel that he is a good caretaker of your heart. |
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