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Love Life Marriage (Reprised)

by Genevieve Sturrock

all perfect men
have flaws to expose when
love gains sight

true love begins
when the honeymoon's over and
the first big fight

stumbling blocks
become building blocks for
the road of life

it takes more
than just exhanging rings to be
husband and wife

01/30/2007

Posted on 01/31/2007
Copyright © 2024 Genevieve Sturrock

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 01/31/07 at 05:49 AM

this is totally going in my fav's!!! this is awesome! love it!

Posted by Scott Utley on 01/31/07 at 06:33 PM

It's easy to tell your songs must be fantastic!

Posted by George Hoerner on 02/04/07 at 12:13 AM

Very well said. It takes a lot of give and take to make a marriage work. Sometimes it is more important to bite ones tougue and let something drop rather than continue an argument. Good write!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/06/07 at 05:52 AM

Your poems have such truth and life's experience in them, and this one is no exception. Thank you!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/06/07 at 04:43 PM

This piece is just so true. It's too bad that more people don't realize what real life/love means. Excellent job!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/07/07 at 02:08 AM

So true....Charlie

Posted by Alisa Js on 02/25/07 at 08:32 AM

Yes, I agree. Love takes commitment... with a great dash of honor, mutual respect and humour.... thanks for sharing.. ;-0

Posted by Amy Wustrin on 02/25/07 at 09:24 PM

simply amazing =)

Posted by Mo Couts on 06/26/11 at 06:01 AM

Absolutely fabulously amazing!

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