| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/17/07 at 07:09 PM The sounds and scene are wonderfully heavy, the "ploughing through" all three is so perfectly expressed and balanced. Exquisitely expressive. |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 01/17/07 at 09:24 PM I like this...a lot! Brings to mind all kinds of images. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/19/07 at 06:08 PM Quite the juxtaposition and comparison. Arriva! Or as we say in Italian...avanti! |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 01/21/07 at 06:18 PM what a fun short little piece, though full of images and wonder... did you ever get through the english/spanish mesh? |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/21/07 at 07:43 PM Marvelous winterly neighborly senryu. |
