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under duress where the sidewalk crumbles

by Kyle Anne Kish

crumble, break.
after all, you deserve
a break today
so set your sights
on remaining
in the past while
the present runs

right

by you

teasing you with
what once was
as you pretend

it still is

... fun.

walk quickly past
the clown. tromp
your way clearly down
main street, smiling
with your teeth
goofily showing
something between
a grimace and a snarl.

borrow a hat from
the hat lady on the street
corner. she’s always
eager to have you
parade around in one
of her finds for the day.

the day is young
so you have plenty
of time to pretend

it still is

... fun.

and fun it may be
if you would look
past your nose,
between your toes
and see the cracks
in the sidewalk.

wait! wait!

those sidewalk cracks
send you into a tizzy,
not remembering
whether to step
on a crack or avoid
them altogether.

i told you to wait
much too late.
now you are
in a tizzy of the ultimate
kind, where kindness
will not show it’s face
for days on end unless
you come to a place
where the sidewalk ends.

but please remember,
though it may be much
too late, the day is young
so you still have plenty
of time to pretend

it still is

... fun.

12/17/2006

Posted on 12/17/2006
Copyright © 2024 Kyle Anne Kish

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/17/06 at 05:07 PM

A strong first stanza - I love "you deserve a break today" nestled in there. The breaks with "right" "by you" are very effective, as are the later ones. Nice touch. The sidewalk with cracks theme is splendid, the walk about, the hat lady, and a hint of Silverstein "where the sidewalk ends". Well done.

Posted by Alisa Js on 12/18/06 at 09:40 PM

what a clever statement of what probably goes on in a lot of our collective minds on planet earth. love the delivery and energy of this one.. aloha..;-)

Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/16/07 at 11:07 PM

I went out side and looked at the cracks in the sidewalk and then..slipped off my shoes and felt the heat of the cement...I smiled.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/09/07 at 03:30 PM

The concept of this really brings one right back to the "past" of one's childhood--where the "cracks" were really important. Almost like a shiver of the present--how could we know? And yet that going back, clownlike, with a different "hat"...the playfulness, can be transforming now, as it was then, in a different direction. It all depends on how the "sidewalk" "crumbles" and how light our step in spite of that, I think. Inventive, zestful and sweet, yet musing and intent.

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