PUMICE by Kristina Woodhill Porcelain sinks lend smooth sides to Unencumbered drainage, that easy exit sought by Man sloughing off unwanted skins or tightening masks that Insist on extra thought, careful logic, those cooperative Characteristics hard found among the shifting volcanics of this Earthly humanscape, and therein lies the rub 12/13/2006 Author's Note: odd thoughts that come when cleaning mineral deposits in the loo Posted on 12/13/2006 Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/13/06 at 07:36 PM Love the flow here, Kristina. A continuous thought that offers many images and seems to meet itself in the end. Well done. Thanks. Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/16/06 at 07:35 PM Yes, I've had some thoughts come to me while in the loo...bathtub thoughts are my favorite. The warm water just has the right atmosphere for creative thinking. I love this and it's simple message. ~Chelle~ Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/08/07 at 12:36 PM when the masks get tight, I usually pour in drano which loosens up that countenance mightily. i love the intricacy of this poem which culminates with a rub. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)