| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/29/06 at 02:47 AM As it should be, and the way I believe also. Well stated! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/29/06 at 03:49 AM Nicely put together. I like how this comes out. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/29/06 at 05:30 AM "My words are my commitment to help those you leave behind" Wouldn't it be great if everyone felt this way? Enjoyed this, Tony. Thanks.
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| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 11/29/06 at 01:11 PM This one really got to me. I liked your conviction to help those left behind. I could feel your pain in your loss. Well written, sad, but at the same time, filled with hope. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/29/06 at 06:13 PM An interesting use of the phrase "a new born child", particularly at the end. I admire your resolve at helping those left behind - there is an acceptance of a lost friend felt here, even with the longing left behind. Nicely done. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/25/09 at 12:29 AM Uniquely and lovingly expressed sorrow. Sadness but with great hope. |
