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triptych

by Peter Humphreys

I

mother
hands
open
arms
outstretched
screaming
into camera
blood stained
children's booties
body parts
anger
rage
inestimable
uncontrollable
unquenchable
grief

II

they've
taken
her
children
away
because
they said
she was not
a good mother
a whore
a junky
a failure of
the human race
a child
that once
ran
with a flower
in her
hand

III

someone
sent me
a photo
not
thinking
it was
real
of a suicide
landing
vertically
from the
40th floor
on
concrete
it is real
I still cannot
sleep
for seeing
her

11/11/2006

Author's Note: This triptych of motherhood is dedicated to Gaza, to Lou Reed (who 40 years ago helped opened my eyes and still does so) and to those who speak of suicide too lightly.

Posted on 11/11/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/11/06 at 05:17 PM

Wrenching - this form is a powerful way to reinforce a many layered tragedy.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/11/06 at 07:35 PM

Peter, I'm apt to agree with the previous comments. Difficult to handle poetically, but the triptych diagrams the subject well. Agree with you about Reed, too. He's a fascinating/brilliant/tragic icon. Thanks.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/13/06 at 11:29 AM

Effective expression of the word "triptych" Peter. Adds a whole new meaning to the saying "there are three sides to every story." Tragic indeed.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 11/14/06 at 03:38 AM

Wrenching, and impossible for me to not feel this. Hushing.

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