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Goldilocks
by Charles E MinshallWhen I saw her standing there
With the sunlight in her hair,
I was lost right then and there,
No other sight could compare.
I must go now she's at the door,
She's our golden labrador.
 10/30/2006 Author's Note: Gotcha....Charlie
Posted on 10/30/2006
Copyright © 2025 Charles E Minshall
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/30/06 at 09:07 PM Ha! And like the story, that last line is. "jjjuuusstttt right"! Thanks Charlie! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/31/06 at 01:45 AM LOL!! Clever! Did you let your wife read this? ;0) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/31/06 at 03:00 AM I've missed your wit lately - and this one is a great hit! Thanks!! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 11/01/06 at 01:40 AM I'm sure even the Beatle's would have gotten a laugh out of this play on a great tune! |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 11/06/06 at 06:26 AM oh, how precious! just loved the surprise ending! as a dog owner and lover, how could i not!! well written. like the rhythm and line breaks! PK |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/08/06 at 07:03 PM LOL! Adds a whole new meaning to "man's best friend." |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 07/19/11 at 03:04 AM Hahaha, totally a 'gotcha' =)! |
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