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Personal Daylight Saving Plan
by Kristina WoodhillOh, no
you dont!
Ive saved
these daylight
hours
for months and
now you really
think
with one
small
stroke
of
two a.m.
youll
pour them
down
time's
sink!
Ive got
news!
Ive penned
them in!
those days
Ive saved-
my schedules
full and
packed
of re-days
I plan to re-live,
of paths
Ive mapped
to track
Ive got
A whoooole
bag
of sand
saved
and
my hour glass
is gonna
flow
in my own time
at my own pace
nice and sweet
and slow!
So please
go diddle
someone
else's time
zone
if
you must
please move
on forward
to your end
enjoy your
pile of dust
Ive planned
a way to
spend my time
to make my
savings last
right now
my future looks
real sweet
as do
days
from my
past
10/28/2006 Author's Note: Just gimme those clocks! Edit.
Posted on 10/28/2006
Copyright © 2026 Kristina Woodhill
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/28/06 at 11:43 PM heheehee! me 2! me 3! |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 10/29/06 at 04:06 AM oh, dear, this is quite a rant, the line breaks are especially convincing in terms of the mood -- that staccato rhythm so effective ... those days
Ive saved-
my schedules
full and
packed
of re-days
I plan to re-live,
of paths
Ive mapped
to track
---this tugs at my heart, truly.....a humorous and memorable read! PK |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/30/06 at 02:54 PM LOL! Excellent comback to the changing of the clocks Kris. I've never read such a poem; refreshingly different. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 10/31/06 at 04:37 AM I LOVE THIS! i wish i could take control of my personal clock every once in a while and regain the hours lost! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/31/06 at 05:16 AM Laughing, because it's a real pain in the butt changing all those clocks around. And I lost 2 hours of sleep because I woke up at 5:30 in the morning. sheesh... Good one, Kristina. I love it!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/31/06 at 08:10 PM Funtastic Kris...Charlie |
| Posted by Tony Young on 11/05/06 at 10:41 AM Fun stuff Kristina, ever tried ordering a cab for
10 past the old 2, quarter to the new 3 ?...
Nice 1 and thanks... |
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