The monkeys have escaped from the barrel.
Parading ridiculously across my tight mouth and taking shelter in my hair,
They twist themselves around my lashes and pull tears from my eyes.
Posted on 10/25/2006Copyright © 2023 Gabrielle L Gervais
I agree with J. Serna completely. Creative and quickly and effectively to the point.
LOL! What a sight to behold - wonderfully stated!
this is GREAT! :) so creative!
Hey - Congrats on POTD!!!
A great POTD!
Beautiful few lines. Yes memories are like that.