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Beyond Reason
by Razel DaviesMy way forward,
is not my way back.
Hold this on,
call the crows.
Ravens black and cold,
doves white and warm,
peace.
But,
how can life be,
this simple when,
it is so complex?
The dove pecks out,
our eyes,
so that we don't see,
it's shedding of,
it's white smile.
The raven,
picking up your smile,
turns up your heart.
We know nothing of,
this world we live.
Hold that night,
the darkest beauty,
mists, greys, dark,
society's ugly,
our handsome.
Loves greatest hope,
people's eyes open,
to see happiness here,
light in dark,
pleasure in pain,
suffer for me, my love,
Hell for Heaven,
beyond reason, is love. 10/01/2006
Posted on 10/01/2006
Copyright © 2024 Razel Davies
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 10/01/06 at 11:35 AM This is very beautiful Razel. I love the contrasts used here. Good is sometimes evil and things are not what we think they should be; they are the opposite. Welcome Back! I couldn't be happier that you're here! |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 10/01/06 at 10:05 PM "Hold that night, the darkest beauty, mists, greys, dark, society's ugly, our handsome. Loves greatest hope,..." Such a stimulating bit of ups and downs, Razel. My brain actually fluctuated back and forth, round and round, up and down. Your contrasts are true to form and your poem teaches a lesson which is oh so true. Beautifully done! ~~ Kyle Anne
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| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/03/06 at 05:23 AM Welcome back to Pathetic Razel. The contrasts in your poem flow like water through rocky layers, each taking the reader to a new (and maybe higher) level.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by P.T. Brooks on 04/26/07 at 02:17 PM i love the contradiction and i found the last line to have great power-pt |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/01/15 at 01:39 PM much truth to be gleaned from this. |
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