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by Ava Blu

i claimed today would be different
and i would walk through this mirror,
but the branches around have split
and i am still stuck on
yesterday.

09/20/2006

Posted on 09/20/2006
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/21/06 at 04:25 AM

Well done. I also like the split branches idea. I can certainly relate to this.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/22/06 at 02:14 PM

Yeah, I think we've all been there...wanting to go throught the mirror, but not fully ready to let go of the past, and split branches nicely metaphoric for forks in the road, parting of ways.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/21/09 at 01:01 AM

One step forward, five steps back, right? At least, that's how it feels sometimes. Another striking image.

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