Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 09/13/06 at 03:13 PM a fine capture of the mystery. |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/13/06 at 07:49 PM I like the way you take this from the logic of the mind to the emotion of the heart because it's quite true that mysterious love confounds even the most learned.
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/13/06 at 10:10 PM Hi Chris. Yes, the story of a love is important. Maybe equally important is that one is capable of love. It is perhaps the only glimpse we are permitted of eternity. Great write. Thanks. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 09/13/06 at 11:10 PM This is a really good explanation for something that is totally un-understandable- LOVE! Great write! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/14/06 at 01:33 AM I love the combination of science and mystery, abstract and concrete in this lesson. The last two lines takes the idea right to the connection. I like this a lot. |
Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 09/14/06 at 07:17 AM Beautifully put, Chris. I like the lines: "dare say / even Einstein would be at a loss / to write out its formula on a blackboard."
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Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/15/06 at 01:29 AM A refreshing look at the old. old theme! One which never really gets old though does it? One never seems to get too old to feel its power! |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/17/06 at 03:19 AM well, all manifestations are always at two levels. many a times with the change in the impressions the chemistery changes. |
Posted by Jacki M Butler on 09/19/06 at 05:12 AM This whole piece is great, but I especially loved "impossible to hold in one’s hand
unless of course holding one another’s " |
Posted by Alisa Js on 12/08/06 at 07:09 PM Love is a wonder! Speaking as a romantic soul here, love is what keeps us alive...as to the exact ingredients for love, I think if you could ask the six billion plus on this planet, you would more than likely get six billion plus answers!..lol.. Love is what keeps this world spinning in my humble opinion. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind sentiment...Aloha to you and yours from this side of paradise..;-) |