Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/12/06 at 04:16 PM Hi Kristina. Have the sky ever taken on such a significance? Wonderful, and love your final stanza. Glad you lent your voice to that day's rememberances. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/14/06 at 12:23 PM Poignant tribute Kris. Reminds me of a beautiful photo I saw in the newspaper the other day of two powerful searchlight beams shooting straight up from ground zero in place of the twin towers. |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/17/06 at 03:47 AM Its a beautiful tribute.One can see and sense the scene on two different levels. |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 01/09/07 at 05:03 PM I love the way the repetition ties it together.... and amazingly strong ending. I also think you are right... Well Done! |