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by Paul Marino

first cold rain --
my girlfriend traces a heart
on the car window


09/05/2006

Posted on 09/05/2006
Copyright © 2024 Paul Marino

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/05/06 at 06:41 PM

Quite effective. Fortunately we don't get that first cold rain here until late October. :o)

Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 09/05/06 at 09:51 PM

I love this. there's that g word again :)

Posted by David R Spellman on 09/06/06 at 12:31 AM

Excellent ku - well done!

Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 09/06/06 at 04:26 AM

Excellent! A graceful snapshot.

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 09/09/06 at 05:08 AM

So few words, so beautiful, so visual, so emotional, Shawnelle. Thanks for sharing.

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