Almost a Haiku! by A. Paige White Don’t want no mansion Just an angel’s chariot Riding eternally. 08/22/2006 Author's Note: Well, this will get low scores for sure. I couldn't get it right. WHAT is eating my apostrophes?!? Posted on 08/23/2006 Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/24/06 at 12:29 AM I like it, eternal life isn't so much to ask for... try forever ;) Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/26/06 at 07:50 PM I like it too for its expression of desire for the heavenly/eternal as opposed to the earth bound materialistic. Besides I'm sure there's a mansion waiting for us all up there, sans the tedious housework. And yes it is almost a haiku if one is counting syllables, but certainly has that haiku impact, and thus makes it one in my books. Kudos! Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 10/26/09 at 12:43 AM Sort of like 'Easy Rider'. I like the way it reads and sounds. Congrats! Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/29/15 at 02:38 PM lovely poem. not a bad thing to desire, an angel's chariot to stroll skies the day through and the evening too. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)