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heat lightning haiku

by Maureen Glaude

in the lull
between fireworks “oohs”
heat lightning

08/17/2006

Author's Note: one I didn't enter in the July kukai for Tadpole but still like. Written after our July 1st celebrations, but works for July 4th too

Posted on 08/17/2006
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/17/06 at 04:38 PM

Yup, works fine visually. Although I couldn't see them, last Saturday at Rasputin's I could hear and feel the vibration of the casino fireworks.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/19/06 at 11:52 PM

Mo, simply beautiful. You are a masterette at haiku. This is similar to one of my poems about July 4th...written many years ago. Appears that fireworks are universal.
~Chelle~

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 08/20/06 at 03:35 AM

I like your usage of heat lightning here, Maureen. I have the whole visual ... fireworks, ohhhs and heat lightning all in my head. Nicely done, Maureen.

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