| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 08/13/06 at 02:03 AM Wow. Now that's an inventory! Great write. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/13/06 at 06:02 AM Yes, indeed a great write. Why is it, that men always want more? But, they won't give more! They always take us women for granted.
I also agree with Paige and Lori. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/16/06 at 04:34 PM Images so cleverly combined and applied to romance. One of your recent best IMO Vere. And definitely heading for my favorites. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/16/06 at 07:14 PM I give you my love
but no heart
I know this line well....the poem captures the truth of some of us well. |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 08/16/06 at 11:40 PM Sometimes all we have to give isn't enough, even for ourselves. So we keep on digging further and further, and fall through the crack of failure. It's not fair, but seems to be the fate of those who are irreparably broken. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/18/06 at 05:57 PM Terrific form. Recognizing limits but still able to give what one can. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 08/20/06 at 03:00 AM The flip side of this portrait is the heart that cannot give enough love and somehow the two often seem to end up in a relationship together...and them you might find yourself "fractured and frantic
further and further
into my own demise" you write how others feel and you do it so well. smh |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 03/24/07 at 03:32 AM random fav today...once again, girl, i loooove your work! you totally and completely rock! |
