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senryu (coal)
by David R Spellman
a blackened heart
leaves no less desire
to wrench it out
08/07/2006 Author's Note: 4UCDs and all your hard work under-mining --- it doesn’t go un-noticed!
Posted on 08/07/2006
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/07/06 at 05:09 PM
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senryu!
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/08/06 at 01:31 AM Masterful - clever, vivid! My mouth spouts superlatives! |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/08/06 at 01:40 AM Many ways to see this, and I like them all... |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/10/06 at 01:39 AM So much said in so few words. Great imagery and significant message. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/10/06 at 03:58 AM Admirable senryu in its economy and depth. Beautifully crafted and wonderful sentiment. Well done, David. |
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