| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/06/06 at 10:44 AM I laughed when I read the title, and cried when I sang this song. How lovely....you are quite talented Mr. Spellman. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 08/06/06 at 06:38 PM -chuckle- The title is humorous but durn, the poem packs a punch. Good one. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/07/06 at 05:14 PM You are a marvel with words! I'm with all of the comments above + can relate completely!
Love the title, love the song, love the love! —Jill |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/08/06 at 01:32 AM Such a weaving of words and mood. A song, for sure. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/08/06 at 01:52 AM Hi David. Wonderful imagery. I appreciate the pensive tone and slight melancholy. Excellent poem. |
| Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 08/08/06 at 03:14 PM Love this. Such a great expession and flow. Love the title, poem, completely. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/09/06 at 01:17 AM most likely a country song? Powerful in this form for sure, and so sad. Well done. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 08/11/06 at 09:21 PM there is an inherent beauty in this poem, it is simplely intoxicating...I felt as though I could hear someone reading this to me...well, well done...a pleasure as always, peace n love, jewels |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/11/06 at 10:44 PM LOL! How can one not be drawn in by the title? And yet what we find is an incredible worthy expression of romantic regret and longing. Masterful stuff Dave. Here's to love...past, present...and future. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/12/06 at 12:06 AM Funtastic Dave. Glad you are writing again....Charlie |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/21/06 at 12:34 AM Oh, Dave, the title is so clever and cute, and then the poem is so eloquent and sort of sad. Beautiful piece. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/21/06 at 03:05 AM Hey! I'm glad to see this as POTD!! |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 03/26/07 at 12:57 PM popped in random fav's today...glad it did. this is wonderful...love the title! my dad is bi-polar and he finally gave in and started taking meds...it's made a huge difference, but i miss the old dad, even with his mood swings. |
