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Fantasy is Sometimes Better Than Reality
by Christel CrewsIf you were here
I'd have cooked dinner for two
And we'd snuggle on the couch
Listening to the rain fall
And the thunder boom
Discussing the days' highs and lows
Then debating over which movie
To view
But the best part of my night would be
Simply spending it with you 07/29/2006
Author's Note: just another saturday night alone, watching tv in my pjs with the rain falling in the background... 3 years of this and it still feels like something is missing
Posted on 07/30/2006
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 07/30/06 at 06:15 AM What a beautiful melancholy picture. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/30/06 at 01:53 PM Wow! As one single to another, this sounds very inviting. Ahhh...if relationships could only be kept so simple. Great poem again Chris; sure tugs on the heart strings. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/30/06 at 04:01 PM This has a very clear, clean feel about it - no whining :) - although the longing is there - really an inviting evening, I must say. |
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