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A flowerfall

by Tony Young

To wander through
this little piece of...
fertile earth
To call heaven
can't be far from true
the multitude of scents
reach out and draw's one to
so many colours
The yellow rose
looks up to say.....
"I interrupt
your so nice day"
and showering
the garden wall
a flowerfall
of red white and blue
a smile
so far away
a thought of you

07/22/2006

Author's Note: It's a garden thing...............

Posted on 07/22/2006
Copyright © 2024 Tony Young

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/23/06 at 03:57 AM

Just the right tone - lovely!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/23/06 at 01:47 PM

Absolutely beautiful! glad you're posting again. It's a garden thing...and a whole lot more! Loved this!

Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 07/23/06 at 01:52 PM

This is really sweet and smile inducing. Nice.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/18/06 at 04:15 PM

A lovely garden of words as well! The scents and sights of a flower garden are always so uplifting! You've caught the essence!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/05/14 at 11:45 AM

incredible imagery. congratulations on POTD.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/06/14 at 03:45 AM

Good to see this as POTD! Congrats, Tony.

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