| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 07/21/06 at 01:36 AM Ah, such tenderness. Lovely piece of work here. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/21/06 at 04:26 PM I second that emotion. It may sound hard to believe but its dang hot up here in Canada also. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 07/21/06 at 11:50 PM Nice work, smacks of dreamy, lazy summer days. Lovely work |
| Posted by Jared Fladeland on 07/22/06 at 02:19 PM hey, HEY, HEY!! Only I'm allowed to have an affair with the sun. Gosh darn it (That was so midwestern)... it better have just been a quick peck on the cheek and on your way you go |
| Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 07/23/06 at 01:15 AM I hate to have to tell you this - but your boyfriend is a bully. He's been beating me up for weeks now - especially around lunch time. He said it was something about not liking pale girls. ;) Nice write! |
| Posted by Tony Young on 07/23/06 at 09:24 AM What shall I write about today ? it's too hot and so obvious. Nice work Kristina |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/23/06 at 01:01 PM Yes, its capable of generating heat dispite the plea, despite all the softness of the words soaked in tenderness. |
| Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 06/27/07 at 05:36 AM The title grabbed me because it's one of my favorite Elvis songs! :) And the poem is timely because we're having 95 degree weather. :( 75/80 is a good temp for me. I like the image of the sun as a lover whose physical presence you can feel & be touched by. Very nice. |
