Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 07/10/06 at 05:12 PM perhaps it prefers to remain speechless, and we would prefer it that way, to maintain the mystery. Modern people might be too much of a shock or maybe even were, already, if its eyes and ears took them in. Fascinating and one of my favourites of your types of subjects, dealt with superbly. |
Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 07/10/06 at 07:32 PM I always complain that not enough modern poets write on truly modern themes. You seem to be an exception, and indeed exceptional. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 07/10/06 at 08:20 PM ...I saw a lady with a mole on her back that looks just like that....maybe that's what it really is? Ha...and a more serious, "oh my!" Great write Chris! |
Posted by Christel Crews on 07/11/06 at 01:35 AM very intriguing.. and the picture just closes the piece so beautifully.. great write |
Posted by JD Clay on 07/11/06 at 04:13 AM Until this mound of Mars speaks as prolific as your poem, I'm content to howl at the moon. I am further intrigued by the city-like structures believed to adorn Big Red. Time will tell. Like your stuff!
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Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 07/11/06 at 04:00 PM Well-done and thought-provoking, Chris - we often seem to be on the same wavelength - see my poem, "Mars Looks Down" (in my Published and Cited folder) for a response.... d:-) |
Posted by Deborah Breuer on 07/11/06 at 09:44 PM Incredible, really, very well written and portrayed. I was particularly moved by the line referencing the limitations of man at the end of the fourth stanza.
Good Work |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 07/13/06 at 01:57 PM I love this kind of poem. Helps me to keep moving into deepee depths...which I also love!
Great write and great subject! |
Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/15/06 at 02:07 AM Hi Chris,
It's amazing, it makes ya wonder what's really out there. Great write. I wanta know how ya wrote it. Did ya study the picture? Or what. I have looked at pictures and wrote about it, like if I were there. Or to image what it would be like to be there, etc. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/15/06 at 03:17 PM Great poem and picture Chris. I once walked on a Mars Bar...Charlie |