Let Me Rock You by Kristina Woodhill Let me rock you in the crescent of the moon We can teeter totter gently to and fro While this new moon back lights with its slivered glow Let'’s recline here in her tilting smile of June Let me rock you with a cheesy crooning tune Make you giggle as I miss-hit every key I'’ll regale you with a tale or two; I'’ll point out Hercules As we float upon this lunar sea pontoon Let me rock you in the crescent of the moon We'’ll hold hands and slow-mo leap the craters deep With our handy geo-hammers, we'’ll find treasures we can keep Some booty for some trading with moon trolls that guard the runes Let me rock you as your eyes seek further stars We'’ll reach the crescent’s tipping-top at last With our star boards from our backs, as the moon begins to wax We’'ll ride her half pipe pell-mell down, then catch a passing comet from afar Let me rock you in the crescent of the moon 'Til it'’s time to pop our chutes and drift back home, our trip complete I will take you in my arms and gently rock you back to sleep Let the moon spin round all on its own outside your room 06/04/2006 Author's Note: There's this thing about the moon.... Edited 3/7/12 Posted on 06/05/2006 Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/05/06 at 01:17 PM I know this thing about the moon, too... Love this thing about the moon... Love poems about this thing about the moon... Hope to always have this thing about the moon... in a poem lilt such like this Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 06/06/06 at 03:58 AM Hi Kristina. This is such a delight. Playful, light and original. I read it like some wonderful comination of love poem, lullaby and child-song. Makes me feel like I've been somewhere...and want to go again. E-ticket, please! Thanks. Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 06/06/06 at 09:18 PM it's a lunar thing, this thing about the moon, I so get it...smh Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/06/06 at 09:22 PM I just love your moon...and everything else about this piece! thanks for the enjoyable read! Posted by Christel Crews on 06/06/06 at 09:25 PM the moon is so inspiring.. this piece is beautiful.. a lullabye i wouldn't mind hearing :) a beautiful write! Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/07/06 at 04:17 AM Yep, there sure is a thing about the moon. Lady Luna appears to have stolen your heart to praise her in the shining star of love. ~Chelle~ Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/08/06 at 11:57 AM Whoa! Talk about a fun flight of fancy. Let me join the others in congratulating you on hitting no. 1 Kristina. Posted by David Hill on 06/09/06 at 01:49 AM I like the gentleness and kindness of the mood, and moon glow always has a subtle spine tingle to it that you evoke quite rightly here. Posted by Mara Meade on 06/09/06 at 02:22 AM This feels like a lullabye... a soft, gentle lullabye. Posted by JD Clay on 06/09/06 at 02:37 PM This moon rock piece has a lyrical sense and would go that extra mile if put to music. Good stuff! pe4ce... Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/13/06 at 02:11 PM Great choice for POTD Kristina. Glad this one made it. :o) Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/14/06 at 05:08 AM Kristina, CONGRATULATIONS on POTD! ~Chelle~ Posted by Mo Couts on 06/24/11 at 11:25 PM And, what a wonderful thing about the moon, oh a lovely thing indeed! Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)