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I don't swallow
by Vere MantratriadI only ever spit poetry,
like some bad taste in my mouth.
I only swap it when it comes from the
lips of someone I want to know. 06/26/2005 Author's Note: repost 06/26/05
Posted on 05/31/2006
Copyright © 2024 Vere Mantratriad
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/31/06 at 05:02 PM Quite the hook in the title, and worthy analogy in the text. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 06/03/06 at 01:01 AM very interesting... the title is awesome too! how do you come up with such intriguing titles :) |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/08/06 at 11:03 AM Short and to the point. Very well expressed in just a few words. Great write! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/08/06 at 04:35 PM A unique approach. I like this a lot. |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 06/12/06 at 07:26 AM i think this is great. and clever! i smiled wide. |
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