| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 05/30/06 at 04:21 PM Lovely piece, Julie. It's always best when these visions are shared, isn't it? Nice write. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/31/06 at 02:02 AM You have given me so much visual pleasure with these brief words. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/31/06 at 01:12 PM And so we meet on a moonlit eve
vía the sky,
God's rolled-up sleeve
síammissimó! —brilliantly writ as I taste the moon! xoxoxo —J**** |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 05/31/06 at 02:33 PM i've driven the verrazzano at night. i love the way you see it! what an eye you have. fantastic use of color, here. i really enjoyed this! pk |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 06/01/06 at 09:03 PM A lovely moment to pause with words. That is what matters. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 06/06/06 at 07:37 PM Your visual is absolutely right-on, and it blows me away how well you compared the moon to a steamy carrot slice. It not only gives the reader a visual, but cuts right through to other senses as well. Great read. Love & peace, Kyle Anne |
