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whoooooooooooosh
by Peter Humphreysbridge
shuddering
express
train
steaming
gushing
rushing
children
watching
feeling
smelling
hearing
ash
smoke
sparks
soot
sweaty
muscular
men
shovelling
eager
exciting
dashing
mystery
just in time
just
in
time
to
feel
that
surge
whoooooooooosh
05/27/2006 Posted on 05/27/2006
Copyright © 2026 Peter Humphreys
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 05/29/06 at 03:49 AM such a fun, vivid piece! the title is full of fun and the piece flows so easily and quickly! i just had to reread it because it went so quickly.. whooosh! :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/29/06 at 02:18 PM A stimulating, fun read, and like any amusement park ride...over much too quickly. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/02/06 at 04:13 AM Great energy in this one - I can see this as a child's illustrated book or a poem for me to read and re-read. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/04/06 at 03:35 PM I just love what you do with split-second moments! I lay inside the words for lengths of time!
I love the word
whoooooooooooosh
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