|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Christel Crews on 05/29/06 at 03:49 AM|
such a fun, vivid piece! the title is full of fun and the piece flows so easily and quickly! i just had to reread it because it went so quickly.. whooosh! :)
|Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 05/29/06 at 09:43 AM|
I love steam locomotives, and this poem. Whooosh, indeed!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/29/06 at 02:18 PM|
A stimulating, fun read, and like any amusement park ride...over much too quickly.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/02/06 at 04:13 AM|
Great energy in this one - I can see this as a child's illustrated book or a poem for me to read and re-read.
|Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 06/02/06 at 07:35 AM|
Trains seem so much more prevelant in European coutries...I'm envious. Though this seems nostalgic, it's not over-the-top sentimental. I'm delighted with its reading. Thanks.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/04/06 at 03:35 PM|
I just love what you do with split-second moments! I lay inside the words for lengths of time!
I love the word