| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 05/21/06 at 09:12 PM A lot of moisture here - well, sodden really :) I imagine I recognise that it's the credible capture of aftermath, drained of tension and free of matter - at least that which doesn't... |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 05/23/06 at 12:58 AM Excellent poem, Max. You are one of the best on here for sure! |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 05/23/06 at 02:59 AM powerful piece, br max. i recognised something quite dali-esque in the imagery. great work. |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/24/06 at 03:53 AM Now THAT is a love poem! Exquisite as usual, Max. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 05/24/06 at 06:37 AM our tongues melt
and drip....We are wet breath
on moist flesh....every word is rapture. i'm drenched in this bliss, from tip to toe. PK |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/27/06 at 01:30 PM Excellent. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 05/30/06 at 02:24 AM This is one helluva sexy poem, Max. Most effective use of language and erotic imagery. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 07/26/06 at 11:55 AM Maria Howard's phobia of drowning now cured. One hell of a treatment you offer Max! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/15/06 at 12:32 AM With a click you've described another language for expressing the most delicious experience. Mmmm. |
