| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 05/10/06 at 08:44 PM HI Christel. There is something peaceful and sublime here. Nice work! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/11/06 at 12:05 AM I sense this. Settling softlike on my mind, Christel. And the color true to the poem.
I felt a peace, too. :) |
| Posted by Matthew Taylor on 05/11/06 at 03:30 AM my, my, might be yor best yet! very clear yet presented in great depth of the soul, lovely!! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/13/06 at 04:36 PM Żes,'no clear line
between yours and mine'is what this beautiful ache is. But then, in the absence of any line, there is this ONENESS at all levels. Besides, this begining confines to this ache alone since in the absence of any line, there cannot be any end and in the absence of any end there cannot be any begining. Let this ache become eternal.
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| Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 05/15/06 at 06:05 PM This is the kind of poem I always wish I could write. This stunning, winding imagery that brings you to your knees. Just beautiful. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/22/06 at 04:55 AM Christel, I think you've spoken for many of us, with these gentle words of desire that all too often stay hidden in our hearts and spirits. I love the imagery you have crafted here.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/10/08 at 02:27 PM Congrats on POTD! This really is quite stunning in its imagery. The last stanza is unique and so very moving. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/16/08 at 02:30 PM Quite the innovative romantic piece Christel. I yearn to know more though as to why the ache? |
