| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/06/06 at 04:55 PM How lovely and musical this little piece is, almost a musical for the eyes as somehow I SEE those playful droplets dancing before me in the sun! Simply lovely and yes, all it takes is such an impression to lead our senses "to spring" - in both dimensions of your meaning. This makes one feel nice and light :-) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/07/06 at 01:18 AM The without causing a beautiful impression within. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/30/06 at 02:20 PM A great choice and arrangement of words lends to easy visualization in the mind. Glad I had a chance to read this Anne. Kudos! |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 06/24/06 at 07:58 AM Beautiful imagary. Lovely write. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 06/28/06 at 07:39 AM Your tiny dancers led a conga line right on into Spring. What an enjoyable POTD, Anne |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/28/06 at 02:02 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Anne. Glad
to see you writing again....Charlie |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/28/06 at 02:41 PM This is not only a refreshing poem but a respite from the busyness of the day. One doesn't need a fountain to feel the splash of healing energy in your melodic words. Who ever said you can't get wet from the word water never read this poem.
Congratulations on becoming The Poet Of The Day.
pe4ce... |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 06/28/06 at 05:45 PM A water ballet, indeed. What a sparkling, tinkling little bit of music. Lovely! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/29/06 at 05:17 AM Refreshing image in rain-parched LA. Congratulations on POTD!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 06/30/06 at 06:23 AM Thank you for lifting my spirits with your sprinkling fountain music. A lovely, playful piece. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/10/06 at 03:00 AM A refreshing and sparkling reminder of spring in the midst of a drought. Thank you for dropping into my senses Anne. |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 10/01/06 at 07:17 PM My sweet baby! You still got it, sweetheart. MUAHS!! |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/06/06 at 12:22 PM Was this the last thing you wrote, or at least the last posted?
Quality for quantity any day, but still a shame. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 10/18/06 at 05:38 AM so lovely, smooth rhythm, rolls off the tongue, the sibilance making perfect sounds. PK |
