|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/04/06 at 02:11 PM|
I love this as a resumé from a garden nursery.
I want to adopt this bud and settle its loveliness right on the lattice of my porch where the sun peeks through searching for a prism-maker! U R a dancer with lightlovely shoes! :)
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/06/06 at 03:06 PM|
Yes, it is pictorial and so alive despite the restricted space. It does find a spotlight.
|Posted by Rula Shin on 05/07/06 at 08:29 PM|
What a vivid scene, painted with a living brushstroke, Life's first moment unfolding before our very eyes. A beautiful metaphor you have here.
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/08/06 at 12:43 AM|
With so few words, you have described so much life. I can really see the birth of the "ballerina bud". Beautiful piece! you have done a great job!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/08/06 at 12:05 PM|
Worthy combination of human and flora, with definite haiku impact.