| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/04/06 at 02:11 PM I love this as a resumé from a garden nursery.
I want to adopt this bud and settle its loveliness right on the lattice of my porch where the sun peeks through searching for a prism-maker! U R a dancer with lightlovely shoes! :) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/06/06 at 03:06 PM Yes, it is pictorial and so alive despite the restricted space. It does find a spotlight. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/07/06 at 08:29 PM What a vivid scene, painted with a living brushstroke, Life's first moment unfolding before our very eyes. A beautiful metaphor you have here. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/08/06 at 12:43 AM With so few words, you have described so much life. I can really see the birth of the "ballerina bud". Beautiful piece! you have done a great job! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/08/06 at 12:05 PM Worthy combination of human and flora, with definite haiku impact. |
