| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/08/06 at 10:31 PM Hi Jim. Great poetic collage of life and nature. Kudos to your ku-skills! Enjoyed these. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/09/06 at 12:25 AM If these are leftovers...please toss me any crumbs! My favorite is all of 'm! Ahem: Jim Benz!!! the Exclamation Office requests to see you immediately! |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 04/11/06 at 11:07 PM For 'leftovers' its very nicely woven together into a tapestry of a neighborhood. |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 04/13/06 at 03:24 AM Having recently attended a haiku conference and workshop, which recharged my interest in the form, I can really appreciate the craft in these. Tasy leftovers, indeed! d:-) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/14/06 at 03:12 PM A feast of finely crafted observations - to my favorites to read and re-read! |
| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 04/14/06 at 05:41 PM I love all the images in this one. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/15/06 at 05:36 PM Excellent grouping of haiku Jim, each standing strong on its own, as well as collectively. Five gold stars in my opinion. |
| Posted by Ben Evans on 04/17/06 at 09:32 AM This was a wonderful collage of images, and as such I canīt really say anything constructively critical about it; I can say, however, how much I enjoyed it. I particularly liked,
"this road
so familiar
leads to other roads"
Fantastic. |
